Second Draft of Teaser Done

I am pleased to announce that the teaser is done. I let it marinate for a few days, observed the rough edges, and then cleaned it up.

Pacing, more than anything else, was what I chose to work on. If you remember, I mentioned several times that I'm new to this. I never made a teaser before. So, understandably, my first teaser needed work.

The teaser moved a little bit too fast. In my opinion, the message wasn't conveyed as well when it moved quickly. There wasn't enough time to get interested in the story. It seemed artificially rushed, like an action movie.

Once the website is done I'll post the teaser to Youtube and embed it on the movie's page.

I admit that the movie is extremely small when compared to Hollywood blockbusters, but I am excited about it, nevertheless.

Just a few more days and I'll be live with it. I'll keep you posted.

Blessings,
Scott Hampton

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